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Peer Revision Checklist: Sensory Details ������������� ������������� ������������� ������������� ������������� ������������� Date:

Author’s Name (who the paper belongs to):_____________________________________________________

Peer Reviewer (who is reviewing the paper):_____________________________________________________

Instructions:

Read your partner’s narrative and provide feedback about their use of sensory details. �


Does the story have details related to the sense of sight?������������� ������������� ������������� ������������� ������������� YES������������� NO

If YES, circle those details in GRAY.�

Does the story have details related to the sense of smell?������������� ������������� ������������� ������������� ������������� YES������������� NO

If YES, circle those details in PINK.�


Does the story have details related to the sense of touch?������������� ������������� ������������� ������������� ������������� YES������������� NO

If YES, circle those details in PURPLE.�

Does the story have details related to the sense of taste?������������� ������������� ������������� ������������� ������������� YES������������� NO

If YES, circle those details in BLACK.�

Does the story have details related to the sense of hearing?������������� ������������� ������������� ������������� YES������������� NO

If YES, circle those details in YELLOW.�

Select TWO different portions of the paper that could benefit from the addition (or an increased number) of sensory details. Circle those sections and write out beside of them ADD SENSORY DETAILS.

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Peer Revision Checklist: Sensory Details ������������� ������������� ������������� ������������� ������������� ������������� Date:

Author’s Name (who the paper belongs to):_____________________________________________________

Peer Reviewer (who is reviewing the paper):_____________________________________________________

Instructions:

Read your partner’s narrative and provide feedback about their use of sensory details.��


Does the story have details related to the sense of sight?������������� ������������� ������������� ������������� ������������� YES������������� NO

If YES, circle those details in GRAY.�

Does the story have details related to the sense of smell?������������� ������������� ������������� ������������� ������������� YES������������� NO

If YES, circle those details in PINK.�


Does the story have details related to the sense of touch?������������� ������������� ������������� ������������� ������������� YES������������� NO

If YES, circle those details in PURPLE.�

Does the story have details related to the sense of taste?������������� ������������� ������������� ������������� ������������� YES������������� NO

If YES, circle those details in BLACK.�

Does the story have details related to the sense of hearing?������������� ������������� ������������� ������������� YES������������� NO

If YES, circle those details in YELLOW.�

Select TWO different portions of the paper that could benefit from the addition (or an increased number) of sensory details. Circle those sections and write out beside of them ADD SENSORY DETAILS.

Personal Revision Checklist: Sensory Details ������������� ��� Name:������������� ������������� ������������ ������������� Date:

Instructions:

Review the comments your partner made about your use of sensory details in your narrative. Then re-read your paper, reflect on your use of sensory details, and answer the following questions:


1) I have included at least five sensory details that help my readers visualize what I want to describe?

�������������

YES������������� NO

2) The sensory details used in my story to help readers visualize will help my readers understand important parts of my story and don’t seem like they were just “thrown in.”

������������� YES������������� NO

3) I have included at least five sensory details that will help my readers hear, touch, taste, or smell in their imaginations what I want to describe.

YES������������� NO

4) All of the sensory details that help my readers hear, touch, taste, or smell in their imaginations will help my readers understand important parts of my story and don’t seem like they were just “thrown in.”

YES������������� NO

5) Based on my partner’s, as well as my own, evaluation of the use of sensory details in my narrative, I need to add additional sensory details or revise details previously included.

������������� YES ������������� NO

Personal Revision Checklist: Sensory Details ������������� ��� Name:������������� ������������� ������������ ������������� Date:

Instructions:

Review the comments your partner made about your use of sensory details in your narrative. Then re-read your paper, reflect on your use of sensory details, and answer the following questions:


1) I have included at least five sensory details that help my readers visualize what I want to describe?

�������������

YES������������� NO

2) The sensory details used in my story to help readers visualize will help my readers understand important parts of my story and don’t seem like they were just “thrown in.”

������������� YES������������� NO

3) I have included at least five sensory details that will help my readers hear, touch, taste, or smell in their imaginations what I want to describe.

YES������������� NO

4) All of the sensory details that help my readers hear, touch, taste, or smell in their imaginations will help my readers understand important parts of my story and don’t seem like they were just “thrown in.”

YES������������� NO

5) Based on my partner’s, as well as my own, evaluation of the use of sensory details in my narrative, I need to add additional sensory details or revise details previously included.

������������� YES ������������� NO

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